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Thoughts and minds meld
Together as they listen to the voice of others
but not their own
You give up?
Then I don’t care!
You give in
I will send no help

Anger and madness cleanse the senses
Revealing true reality to those that seek it blindly
Tormented cries stricken the hearts of young and old
Old Morbid fingers withering
But still he cries

Pointing his fingers at the problems made
But his own mind clouding him
His eyes seeing all but a delusion
A false-hood of madness and deceit.

Do not Deny my right
Do not Deny my Glory and Dreams
Leave me if you must
But I will carry on,
What I made a promise to
To my Soul my own beating Heart
To carry out my dreams
That is my ultimate goal

You that sits there bringing forth doubt and shame,
Reel your head back and listen closely
Nothing you say to me anymore
Will break me nor harm my fragile mind
I’ve become a stone wall,
Not budging perfectly unmoving
Your selfish taunts are just a false hope
Which will lead you to no satisfaction

Believe in the words that are spoken here
I will not be Denied anymore,
Carry out the message that I seek,
That I will prove you all wrong
To stand up and gain my own power
For once I overcome myself
There is no way you can win!
©2007-2009 ~Hitooou
:iconhitooou:

Author's Comments

Hmmm...feelings I guess? Dont know myself,just all came out

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:iconkurious183:
flows well though, and like they way you used the vocab and fit them in there. better than i can do lol... its good :) seems like you have a battle to win

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:icontara-san:
Sounds really good. :+fav:

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If it weren't this , it would be something else.
Elizabethtown.
:iconhitooou:
thanks =)

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"Live in Peace"
-Matt 1989-2008

Do not look at life as a joke, all it takes is one instant,and everything you are is gone..

Live life to the fullest, and never look back. Enjoy love and always live in peace!!
:icontara-san:
Very welcome. :D

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If it weren't this , it would be something else.
Elizabethtown.
:iconexistinmind:
holy cow! this is my first fav since i've decided to come back. how have you been? if you even remember me...

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"I find beauty in imperfection"
:iconhitooou:
yea i remember you...im a fucken mess,i cant win agenst myself so i make others sad,agery,cry for me...i hate it so much

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"Live in Peace"
-Matt 1989-2008

Do not look at life as a joke, all it takes is one instant,and everything you are is gone..

Live life to the fullest, and never look back. Enjoy love and always live in peace!!

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